nail in a coffin.
the underground rail road wasnt a rail road or under ground.
shakspere wasnt real.
apple pie is only american if everything but the crust has been eaten.
god looks at me in the mirror and chuckles.
mother teresa didn’t give a shit about anyone but herself and her poodle “nibbles”.
ghandi was a glutton.
moss grows on the stupid side of trees and just sits there all day being mossy.
moses built a huge boat and had a bitchin giraffe party where all the giraffe’s heads were on fire.
just thinking about doing something makes the clock tick.
lance armstrong is a lazy slob.
neil armstrong walked on the living room floor in his bvds.
the moon isn’t real it was just a conspiracy.
abraham lincoln was a stone faced liar and a biggot.
da vinnci’s code is: down,down,up,down,high punch.
specification is for pink hairless ferrets with no guts.
birkenstock sandles and torn notre dame hats are the boots and helmet of the clone warrior hybrid.
coke or pepsi?
HIStory.
not my kind of poem. . . . 0/10
hmm. . . .
3/10
1 it is disgusting.
- 50,garbage.
Random and weird. But if you’re the same person that posted that other poem, then I think it’s an improvement from the last one. I’d give it an 8. I do like the part at the end where you say “Coke or pepsi” HIStory. ” That part sounds cool to me. Also, I like the part “da vinnci’s code is: down, down, up, down, high punch”. That also sounds cool to me. And it’s interesting to read and a little suspensful, which is good. It still probably needs a little bit of work, maybe a little bit rearranging, kind of separating a thought from a new thought. That makes it better for the reader to read.